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    First single from 'Debauch' - "Pathological Feelings (To Your Demise)"

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    Post by Mikal 3/5/2013, 1:54 am

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    Post by Mikal 3/5/2013, 1:55 am

    It's on time too so up out my face

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    Post by Cool Nebraska Guy 3/5/2013, 2:08 am

    So the song flows pretty well but it's kind of hard to tell the difference between the chorus, the bridge, and the verses. It all kind of collides together and there's nothing really making any of them stand out on their own.


    The lyrics feel genuine but tend to be a bit Taylor Swifty at times. There's a lot of love songs and there's nothing that really makes this one pop out in comparison to a lot of the others to me.



    Overall: 5.5/10
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    Post by Mikal 3/5/2013, 2:09 am

    they supposed to blend dumb dumb
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    Post by Cool Nebraska Guy 3/5/2013, 2:12 am

    slaythisway wrote:they supposed to blend dumb dumb
    ik but they didnt
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    Post by Mikal 3/5/2013, 2:14 am

    Cool Nebraska Guy wrote:
    slaythisway wrote:they supposed to blend dumb dumb
    ik but they didnt
    Cool Nebraska Guy wrote:It all kind of collides together

    Not changin my song structure for ratchets.
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    Post by Cool Nebraska Guy 3/5/2013, 2:18 am

    slaythisway wrote:
    Cool Nebraska Guy wrote:
    slaythisway wrote:they supposed to blend dumb dumb
    ik but they didnt
    Cool Nebraska Guy wrote:It all kind of collides together

    Not changin my song structure for ratchets.
    Just usin the 100% pure truth brand of tea
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    Post by PrincessOfMischief 3/5/2013, 5:42 pm

    tbh i liked it. Though your lyrics were taylor swifty, they were deep. i kinda agree with jub on structure but i thought it was pretty good! 6/10
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    Post by Pop Ate My Hearts 3/5/2013, 5:48 pm

    I do agree with Jub on the structure, I didn't know where the chorus was. But on the other hand, I thought some of the lyrics were incredibly clever and some of the verses or pre-bridges or post-intros whatever they are flowed very nicely.

    Overall I think it's a great lead single and I am looking forward to more stuff.
    7/10.
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    Post by Mikal 3/5/2013, 5:55 pm

    i'll cut you all on the structure cuz it's supposed to be that way when you sing it

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    Post by Pop Ate My Hearts 3/5/2013, 5:59 pm

    I know but we haven't heard it yet. We only read it.
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    Post by PrincessOfMischief 3/5/2013, 5:59 pm

    oh damn i see mikal's thirst coming through!!! *gets hose* [You must be registered and logged in to see this link.]
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    Post by Mikal 3/5/2013, 6:01 pm

    gagasalohaprincess wrote:oh damn i see mikal's thirst coming through!!! *gets hose* [You must be registered and logged in to see this link.]
    i'm just bein gags

    dis fuckin reterded my seng don't sound like taylor swift it's only the chord progression
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    Post by PrincessOfMischief 3/5/2013, 6:04 pm

    slaythisway wrote:
    gagasalohaprincess wrote:oh damn i see mikal's thirst coming through!!! *gets hose* [You must be registered and logged in to see this link.]
    i'm just bein gags

    dis fuckin reterded my seng don't sound like taylor swift it's only the chord progression
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    artist replies do not count for threads and you said to get rid of the charts anyway First single from 'Debauch' - "Pathological Feelings (To Your Demise)" 3588750078
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    Post by PrincessOfMischief 3/5/2013, 6:08 pm

    ik but i just like the gif
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    gagasalohaprincess wrote:ik but i just like the gif
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    Post by PrincessOfMischief 3/5/2013, 6:14 pm

    OH MIKAL
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    Post by Mikal 3/5/2013, 6:16 pm

    this might just turn out to be an EP instead of a full on album actually since new inspiration has struck me :raven:
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    Post by PrincessOfMischief 3/5/2013, 6:16 pm

    good god child
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    Post by Mikal 3/5/2013, 6:19 pm

    gagasalohaprincess wrote:good god child
    wut? First single from 'Debauch' - "Pathological Feelings (To Your Demise)" 567326314
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    Post by psychoticmusichead 3/5/2013, 7:43 pm

    I'm gonna do a Mikal review

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    I did understand the structure you portrayed. Very ideal. Although, as you can see, I got confused about what you were talking about in the song. So you love him, but you don't know how to love him? And he doesn't know how to feel? I'm slightly confused with the message. The lyrics were good, although they didn't blend well towards the end. I didn't see this song Taylor Swifty at all. Nice first single :)

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    Post by Mikal 3/5/2013, 7:58 pm

    I labeled the parts of the song ✝

    the song is about feelings

    feelings for someone

    feelings that confuse you, make you want someone,make you hate someone when they don't return the feelings

    portrays me not being strong enough to support these feelings, someone not truly having these feelings, me finally giving in to the feelings and then me using those feelings for something other than love. sayin i could run the world if everyone loved me like that. sayin how a "fancy love affair" makes people feel validated as a human being that they are in a relationship. and for those people who put no time or work into a relationship, they're going to fail.
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    Post by psychoticmusichead 3/5/2013, 8:00 pm

    slaythisway wrote:I labeled the parts of the song ✝

    the song is about feelings

    feelings for someone

    feelings that confuse you, make you want someone,make you hate someone when they don't return the feelings

    portrays me not being strong enough to support these feelings, someone not truly having these feelings, me finally giving in to the feelings and then me using those feelings for something other than love. sayin i could run the world if everyone loved me like that. sayin how a "fancy love affair" makes people feel validated as a human being that they are in a relationship. and for those people who put no time or work into a relationship, they're going to fail.
    Ohh okay. That makes sense now you talk about it. First single from 'Debauch' - "Pathological Feelings (To Your Demise)" 32833431 I still loved the song <3
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