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    My sister's song "Alright"

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    Post by psychoticmusichead 6/27/2012, 4:17 pm

    My sister wrote a song this morning and I wanted to share it with you guys. I'm so proud of her for taking an interest in writing songs. I helped her set up the song structure and stuff like that. This is her first song, so enjoy :)

    Alright

    Verse 1:
    Time is cleared and everything came crashing down
    It was like a moment you were there and now you’re not around
    I thought two months we would be past that now
    But instead, you left me hanging around

    Pre-Chorus:
    This is where you left me hanging saying let’s be friends
    But I can’t look into your eyes again

    Chorus:
    I looked at your face you smiled and said alright
    The time is up and ready to say goodbye
    You thought that everything was alright
    Alright, alright, no no no oh oh oh ooh

    Verse 2:
    All those times of laughing together for so long
    Those memories are tattered but I know I am stronger
    In the ending looking at you
    I guess I never knew this was the alternate ending

    Chorus:
    I looked at your face you smiled and said alright
    The time is up and ready to say goodbye
    You thought that everything was alright
    Alright, alright, no no no oh oh oh ooh

    Bridge:
    I have learned through my better judgment that you were never anything
    It all had gone away but in the end, look who is always here to stay
    Say I never did anything look who’s a talking isn’t it all the same
    Same game every day, same game every day, same game all the same

    Chorus:
    I looked at your face you smiled and said alright
    The time is up and ready to say goodbye
    You thought that everything was alright
    Alright, alright, no no no oh oh oh ooh
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    Post by PrincessOfMischief 6/27/2012, 4:30 pm

    I LIKE IT! song writing runs in your family! i approve
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    Post by psychoticmusichead 6/29/2012, 6:45 pm

    Lol thanks :D
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    Post by PrincessOfMischief 7/2/2012, 3:22 am

    anytime :D
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    Post by Mikal 7/5/2012, 6:41 pm

    Pretty neat song she wrote.
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