Some brain vomit

I call this little poem-thing "Guitar"

I'm a guitar
I've experienced with many hands
Hands from all sorts of backgrounds
Hands from different parts of the world
Hands from a variety of different people

But all those hands know how to touch
Touch you may ask? Not just touching objects
But for touching people
A set of hands can touch many people
A set of hands can cure a feeling of emptiness, start some fun, be used for romantic releases, and for belonging

When people play me, they express their feelings
Through their hands, they tell a story
They can tell the most beautiful stories or the most deepest uprisings
Each set of hands share of a different story

Fingers flick through my strings
A palm slaps against my body
Knuckles grasp around my neck
The hands can express a lot to me

I'm a guitar
Many hands have played on me
Each day is a new day with a new set of hands
Think of it as life
Life gives you a new opportunity each day
Just take it because every experience you get is one hard to forget

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Thank you bb

This is really nice tho. How the guitar is brought to life and used as a metaphor. So poetic.

This metaphor actually reminds me of the metaphor in one of the songs for my new album, "Guitar Strings". you can find the demo track listing of ma album debauch in my debauch thread

slaythisway wrote:This is really nice tho. How the guitar is brought to life and used as a metaphor. So poetic.

slaythisway wrote:This metaphor actually reminds me of the metaphor in one of the songs for my new album, "Guitar Strings". you can find the demo track listing of ma album debauch in my debauch thread

I was inspired by this one poem about pianos I saw. And cool!!! Imma check out the demo tracklisting!

ELEGANT!!! i like it v much

Thank you Mandi <3333

it is a very flawless poem

and oooo pianos that sounds interesting

slaythisway wrote:it is a very flawless poem

and oooo pianos that sounds interesting

It was a very dark piano poem o.O

welcome girl!

Psychotic Music Head wrote:

slaythisway wrote:it is a very flawless poem

and oooo pianos that sounds interesting

It was a very dark piano poem o.O

What all did it say?

slaythisway wrote:

Psychotic Music Head wrote:

slaythisway wrote:it is a very flawless poem

and oooo pianos that sounds interesting

It was a very dark piano poem o.O

What all did it say?

I'm not sure if I can remember it all; it was two pages long o____O I might go find it.

Psychotic Music Head wrote:

slaythisway wrote:

Psychotic Music Head wrote:

slaythisway wrote:it is a very flawless poem

and oooo pianos that sounds interesting

It was a very dark piano poem o.O

What all did it say?

I'm not sure if I can remember it all; it was two pages long o____O I might go find it.

Damn that's long for a dark piano poem.

slaythisway wrote:

Psychotic Music Head wrote:

slaythisway wrote:

Psychotic Music Head wrote:

slaythisway wrote:it is a very flawless poem

and oooo pianos that sounds interesting

It was a very dark piano poem o.O

What all did it say?

I'm not sure if I can remember it all; it was two pages long o____O I might go find it.

Damn that's long for a dark piano poem.

ooo damn i wanna read this

gagasalohaprincess wrote:

slaythisway wrote:

Psychotic Music Head wrote:

slaythisway wrote:

Psychotic Music Head wrote:

slaythisway wrote:it is a very flawless poem

and oooo pianos that sounds interesting

It was a very dark piano poem o.O

What all did it say?

I'm not sure if I can remember it all; it was two pages long o____O I might go find it.

Damn that's long for a dark piano poem.

ooo damn i wanna read this

Share it with us pls Anyssa

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I cannot find it omgg I'm going to have to ask this guy I know cuz he has it