Insane Electric - 2nd single

My feelings for you have been driving me crazy
since day one
why me though?
Maybe it's a blessing
Maybe it's a curse
to feel so emotionally bonded to you
to share the pain you share
to share the laughter you share
we are nothing but atoms and cells
yet the electricity between us,
is something i've never felt before
this is something special
it's violent
it's insanity
it's obsession
it's us

the sparks fly
faster and stronger
everytime we are near
i dont understand this science, baby
maybe it's a chemical defect
never been one for love
but now im not sure
you've screwed me up
and now i don't ever want to go back

memories plaquing me
i feel you, somewhere
in time and space
reaching out
my world is centered again
this cold rock among the stars
doesn't feel so cold with you here

the sparks fly
faster and stronger
everytime we are near
i dont understand this science, baby
maybe it's a chemical defect
never been one for love
but now im not sure
you've screwed me up
and now i don't ever want to go back

This insane electric, baby
you're my other half

It's very nice. But there is absolutely no structure at all. Like even if it's supposed to be like that I can't even see how the words would flow in each paragraph.

I love the title alot.
6.5/10.

Loves it

8/10

@mark it wasn't supposed to have structure. it's mah words... with a beat... im going katy perry on you guys

@mikal ty bb

it def has an Americano/Highway Unicorn structure tho (D)

slaythisway wrote:it def has an Americano/Highway Unicorn structure tho (D)

orly? HU i can see.... a little....

gagasalohaprincess wrote:

slaythisway wrote:it def has an Americano/Highway Unicorn structure tho (D)

orly? HU i can see.... a little....

It's a simple verse-chorus-verse-chorus-outro

slaythisway wrote:

gagasalohaprincess wrote:

slaythisway wrote:it def has an Americano/Highway Unicorn structure tho (D)

orly? HU i can see.... a little....

It's a simple verse-chorus-verse-chorus-outro

basically wut i was going for tbh

gagasalohaprincess wrote:

slaythisway wrote:

gagasalohaprincess wrote:

slaythisway wrote:it def has an Americano/Highway Unicorn structure tho (D)

orly? HU i can see.... a little....

It's a simple verse-chorus-verse-chorus-outro

basically wut i was going for tbh

yeah idk seems structured to me

slaythisway wrote:

gagasalohaprincess wrote:

slaythisway wrote:

gagasalohaprincess wrote:

slaythisway wrote:it def has an Americano/Highway Unicorn structure tho (D)

orly? HU i can see.... a little....

It's a simple verse-chorus-verse-chorus-outro

basically wut i was going for tbh

yeah idk seems structured to me

ty bb

so does this mean i post the lead single from Debauch

yes

Very neat.

6/10

Damn the people on this forum are strict critics

JusTNA wrote:Very neat.

6/10

NEAT?!

Yes. Very neat.

When I read it, I thought of a whole "Justify My Love" 2.0 thing going on! I love it! :D It's so mysterious. Sometimes, it's like you enter my mind cuz I think the same thing when I meet people who really spark me!

8/10

Psychotic Music Head wrote:When I read it, I thought of a whole "Justify My Love" 2.0 thing going on! I love it! :D It's so mysterious. Sometimes, it's like you enter my mind cuz I think the same thing when I meet people who really spark me!

8/10

thank you! :D and ikr! like you just meet people and instantly they become apart of you, and you share their emotions and thats what this was about

gagasalohaprincess wrote:

Psychotic Music Head wrote:When I read it, I thought of a whole "Justify My Love" 2.0 thing going on! I love it! :D It's so mysterious. Sometimes, it's like you enter my mind cuz I think the same thing when I meet people who really spark me!

8/10

thank you! :D and ikr! like you just meet people and instantly they become apart of you, and you share their emotions and thats what this was about

Yes exactly!!!!

Psychotic Music Head wrote:

gagasalohaprincess wrote:

Psychotic Music Head wrote:When I read it, I thought of a whole "Justify My Love" 2.0 thing going on! I love it! It's so mysterious. Sometimes, it's like you enter my mind cuz I think the same thing when I meet people who really spark me!

8/10

thank you! and ikr! like you just meet people and instantly they become apart of you, and you share their emotions and thats what this was about

Yes exactly!!!!

fancy

Psychotic Music Head wrote:

gagasalohaprincess wrote:

Psychotic Music Head wrote:When I read it, I thought of a whole "Justify My Love" 2.0 thing going on! I love it! :D It's so mysterious. Sometimes, it's like you enter my mind cuz I think the same thing when I meet people who really spark me!

8/10

thank you! :D and ikr! like you just meet people and instantly they become apart of you, and you share their emotions and thats what this was about

Yes exactly!!!!

see anyssa gets my thinking

gagasalohaprincess wrote:

Psychotic Music Head wrote:

gagasalohaprincess wrote:

Psychotic Music Head wrote:When I read it, I thought of a whole "Justify My Love" 2.0 thing going on! I love it! It's so mysterious. Sometimes, it's like you enter my mind cuz I think the same thing when I meet people who really spark me!

8/10

thank you! and ikr! like you just meet people and instantly they become apart of you, and you share their emotions and thats what this was about

Yes exactly!!!!

see anyssa gets my thinking

gurl i got it

slaythisway wrote:

gagasalohaprincess wrote:

Psychotic Music Head wrote:

gagasalohaprincess wrote:

Psychotic Music Head wrote:When I read it, I thought of a whole "Justify My Love" 2.0 thing going on! I love it! It's so mysterious. Sometimes, it's like you enter my mind cuz I think the same thing when I meet people who really spark me!

8/10

thank you! and ikr! like you just meet people and instantly they become apart of you, and you share their emotions and thats what this was about

Yes exactly!!!!

see anyssa gets my thinking

gurl i got it

and mikal too

gagasalohaprincess wrote:

slaythisway wrote:

gagasalohaprincess wrote:

Psychotic Music Head wrote:

gagasalohaprincess wrote:

Psychotic Music Head wrote:When I read it, I thought of a whole "Justify My Love" 2.0 thing going on! I love it! It's so mysterious. Sometimes, it's like you enter my mind cuz I think the same thing when I meet people who really spark me!

8/10

thank you! and ikr! like you just meet people and instantly they become apart of you, and you share their emotions and thats what this was about

Yes exactly!!!!

see anyssa gets my thinking

gurl i got it

and mikal too

:cheer:

slaythisway wrote:

gagasalohaprincess wrote:

slaythisway wrote:

gagasalohaprincess wrote:

Psychotic Music Head wrote:

gagasalohaprincess wrote:

Psychotic Music Head wrote:When I read it, I thought of a whole "Justify My Love" 2.0 thing going on! I love it! It's so mysterious. Sometimes, it's like you enter my mind cuz I think the same thing when I meet people who really spark me!

8/10

thank you! and ikr! like you just meet people and instantly they become apart of you, and you share their emotions and thats what this was about

Yes exactly!!!!

see anyssa gets my thinking

gurl i got it

and mikal too

:cheer: