So Happy I Could Die

Would you like to react to this message? Create an account in a few clicks or log in to continue.

5 posters

    Father [Updated with instrumental]

    Cool Nebraska Guy
    Cool Nebraska Guy
    Administrator
    Administrator


    Member Since : 2011-07-28

    Posts : 2985

    Location : The Slums of Nebraska

    Bio : I'm fun.

    Father [Updated with instrumental] Empty Father [Updated with instrumental]

    Post by Cool Nebraska Guy 2/25/2013, 3:53 am

    Father

    Father why'd you have to go
    Before I ever got to say goodbye

    Father why'd you never love me
    Before you tried to know me

    Father why'd you make mom cry
    She was just trying to get by

    Father

    Oh Father

    Mother was just 19 when you left
    She wasn't ready to be on her own

    Mother was lost and alone
    You abandoned our home

    Mother didn't ask for it all
    You cut her deeply

    Father

    Oh Father

    I always wonder who you were
    Why you'd do the things you did

    I wonder how someone can be so selfish
    Then I remember that you are human

    I hurt inside because of you
    But because of you I am me

    Father

    Oh Father

    We're doing fine without you now
    At first it was tough but we're ok

    We have a family without you now
    With you we'd be broken

    We live a life that's happy now
    Thank you for not staying around

    Daddy

    Oh daddy



    Last edited by Cool Nebraska Guy on 2/28/2013, 4:12 pm; edited 2 times in total
    Mikal
    Mikal
    Administrator
    Administrator


    Member Since : 2011-08-11

    Posts : 7413

    Location : Pittsburgh

    Bio : My life is a play.

    Father [Updated with instrumental] Empty Re: Father [Updated with instrumental]

    Post by Mikal 2/25/2013, 4:27 am

    Spoiler:

    Overall: The song felt really choppy and without structure. I feel the emotion within it, and it is a powerful message. I'd say this feels rushed.

    3/10

    Father [Updated with instrumental] 4005550479 Don't kill me.
    Cool Nebraska Guy
    Cool Nebraska Guy
    Administrator
    Administrator


    Member Since : 2011-07-28

    Posts : 2985

    Location : The Slums of Nebraska

    Bio : I'm fun.

    Father [Updated with instrumental] Empty Re: Father [Updated with instrumental]

    Post by Cool Nebraska Guy 2/25/2013, 4:32 am

    Welll gurl it was basically a spin off of a John Lennon song called Mother which goes like this.

    Mother, you had me
    But I never had you
    I wanted you
    But you didn't want me
    So
    I got to tell you
    Goodbye
    Goodbye

    Father, you left me
    But I never left you
    I needed you
    But you didn't need me
    So
    I just got to tell you
    Goodbye
    Goodbye

    Children, don't do
    What I have done
    I couldn't walk
    And I tried to run
    So
    I got to tell you
    Goodbye
    Goodbye

    Mama don't go
    Daddy come home
    Mama don't go
    Daddy come home
    Mama don't go
    Daddy come home
    Mama don't go
    Daddy come home
    Pop Ate My Hearts
    Pop Ate My Hearts
    Icon
    Icon


    Member Since : 2011-08-11

    Posts : 3835

    Location : The Monster Pit

    Bio : If Gaga is poison for our minds, then inject me.

    Father [Updated with instrumental] Empty Re: Father [Updated with instrumental]

    Post by Pop Ate My Hearts 2/25/2013, 4:33 am

    Again, this story is very touching. But it could've come across in a more artistic way.
    :twisted:

    5/10
    Mikal
    Mikal
    Administrator
    Administrator


    Member Since : 2011-08-11

    Posts : 7413

    Location : Pittsburgh

    Bio : My life is a play.

    Father [Updated with instrumental] Empty Re: Father [Updated with instrumental]

    Post by Mikal 2/25/2013, 4:35 am

    John Lennon may have Imagine under his belt but that song is 💩
    Cool Nebraska Guy
    Cool Nebraska Guy
    Administrator
    Administrator


    Member Since : 2011-07-28

    Posts : 2985

    Location : The Slums of Nebraska

    Bio : I'm fun.

    Father [Updated with instrumental] Empty Re: Father [Updated with instrumental]

    Post by Cool Nebraska Guy 2/25/2013, 4:41 am

    slaythisway wrote:John Lennon may have Imagine under his belt but that song is 💩
    Don't know whether or not to use logic or an Alyssa Edwards gif.






    [You must be registered and logged in to see this image.]
    Mikal
    Mikal
    Administrator
    Administrator


    Member Since : 2011-08-11

    Posts : 7413

    Location : Pittsburgh

    Bio : My life is a play.

    Father [Updated with instrumental] Empty Re: Father [Updated with instrumental]

    Post by Mikal 2/25/2013, 4:48 am

    That isn't your song.

    Father [Updated with instrumental] 2958557780
    Cool Nebraska Guy
    Cool Nebraska Guy
    Administrator
    Administrator


    Member Since : 2011-07-28

    Posts : 2985

    Location : The Slums of Nebraska

    Bio : I'm fun.

    Father [Updated with instrumental] Empty Re: Father [Updated with instrumental]

    Post by Cool Nebraska Guy 2/25/2013, 4:49 am

    Is still a masterpeice.
    PrincessOfMischief
    PrincessOfMischief
    Icon
    Icon


    Member Since : 2011-08-11

    Posts : 5634

    Location : Asgard

    Bio : Sold my soul to a man in a golden helmet and green

    Father [Updated with instrumental] Empty Re: Father [Updated with instrumental]

    Post by PrincessOfMischief 2/25/2013, 5:53 pm

    reminded me of madonna's "Oh Father" 1/10 Father [Updated with instrumental] 1508397542

    JKJKJKJK I LOVED IT <33333 8/10
    Cool Nebraska Guy
    Cool Nebraska Guy
    Administrator
    Administrator


    Member Since : 2011-07-28

    Posts : 2985

    Location : The Slums of Nebraska

    Bio : I'm fun.

    Father [Updated with instrumental] Empty Re: Father [Updated with instrumental]

    Post by Cool Nebraska Guy 2/25/2013, 6:01 pm

    Ty Mandi. <3

    Mikal and Markrs are just being Cathy Horyn because they are obvs threatened at this point.

    [You must be registered and logged in to see this image.]
    PrincessOfMischief
    PrincessOfMischief
    Icon
    Icon


    Member Since : 2011-08-11

    Posts : 5634

    Location : Asgard

    Bio : Sold my soul to a man in a golden helmet and green

    Father [Updated with instrumental] Empty Re: Father [Updated with instrumental]

    Post by PrincessOfMischief 2/25/2013, 6:13 pm

    Cool Nebraska Guy wrote:Ty Mandi. <3

    Mikal and Markrs are just being Cathy Horyn because they are obvs threatened at this point.

    [You must be registered and logged in to see this image.]
    mhmm preach girl this is some threatening shit right here. they haters
    Cool Nebraska Guy
    Cool Nebraska Guy
    Administrator
    Administrator


    Member Since : 2011-07-28

    Posts : 2985

    Location : The Slums of Nebraska

    Bio : I'm fun.

    Father [Updated with instrumental] Empty Re: Father [Updated with instrumental]

    Post by Cool Nebraska Guy 2/25/2013, 6:48 pm

    [You must be registered and logged in to see this image.]
    PrincessOfMischief
    PrincessOfMischief
    Icon
    Icon


    Member Since : 2011-08-11

    Posts : 5634

    Location : Asgard

    Bio : Sold my soul to a man in a golden helmet and green

    Father [Updated with instrumental] Empty Re: Father [Updated with instrumental]

    Post by PrincessOfMischief 2/25/2013, 6:50 pm

    Cool Nebraska Guy wrote:[You must be registered and logged in to see this image.]
    PrincessOfMischief
    PrincessOfMischief
    Icon
    Icon


    Member Since : 2011-08-11

    Posts : 5634

    Location : Asgard

    Bio : Sold my soul to a man in a golden helmet and green

    Father [Updated with instrumental] Empty Re: Father [Updated with instrumental]

    Post by PrincessOfMischief 2/25/2013, 7:13 pm

    real rating: 6/10 bc it lacks structure and feels but its creative
    Cool Nebraska Guy
    Cool Nebraska Guy
    Administrator
    Administrator


    Member Since : 2011-07-28

    Posts : 2985

    Location : The Slums of Nebraska

    Bio : I'm fun.

    Father [Updated with instrumental] Empty Re: Father [Updated with instrumental]

    Post by Cool Nebraska Guy 2/25/2013, 7:13 pm

    gagasalohaprincess wrote:real rating: 6/10 bc it lacks structure and feels but its creative
    I thought it had feels but lacks creative :umno:
    PrincessOfMischief
    PrincessOfMischief
    Icon
    Icon


    Member Since : 2011-08-11

    Posts : 5634

    Location : Asgard

    Bio : Sold my soul to a man in a golden helmet and green

    Father [Updated with instrumental] Empty Re: Father [Updated with instrumental]

    Post by PrincessOfMischief 2/25/2013, 7:22 pm

    Cool Nebraska Guy wrote:
    gagasalohaprincess wrote:real rating: 6/10 bc it lacks structure and feels but its creative
    I thought it had feels but lacks creative :umno:
    idk im horrible at this rating shit man
    Cool Nebraska Guy
    Cool Nebraska Guy
    Administrator
    Administrator


    Member Since : 2011-07-28

    Posts : 2985

    Location : The Slums of Nebraska

    Bio : I'm fun.

    Father [Updated with instrumental] Empty Re: Father [Updated with instrumental]

    Post by Cool Nebraska Guy 2/25/2013, 7:24 pm

    gagasalohaprincess wrote:
    Cool Nebraska Guy wrote:
    gagasalohaprincess wrote:real rating: 6/10 bc it lacks structure and feels but its creative
    I thought it had feels but lacks creative :umno:
    idk im horrible at this rating shit man
    LOL


    Well as far as creativity goes, I wasn't really going for any. It's supposed to be more of a forthright story put to the tune of a song.
    Pop Ate My Hearts
    Pop Ate My Hearts
    Icon
    Icon


    Member Since : 2011-08-11

    Posts : 3835

    Location : The Monster Pit

    Bio : If Gaga is poison for our minds, then inject me.

    Father [Updated with instrumental] Empty Re: Father [Updated with instrumental]

    Post by Pop Ate My Hearts 2/25/2013, 7:25 pm

    Father [Updated with instrumental] 3807274332
    Cool Nebraska Guy
    Cool Nebraska Guy
    Administrator
    Administrator


    Member Since : 2011-07-28

    Posts : 2985

    Location : The Slums of Nebraska

    Bio : I'm fun.

    Father [Updated with instrumental] Empty Re: Father [Updated with instrumental]

    Post by Cool Nebraska Guy 2/25/2013, 7:30 pm

    Just esplainin the song Markus.

    [You must be registered and logged in to see this image.]
    PrincessOfMischief
    PrincessOfMischief
    Icon
    Icon


    Member Since : 2011-08-11

    Posts : 5634

    Location : Asgard

    Bio : Sold my soul to a man in a golden helmet and green

    Father [Updated with instrumental] Empty Re: Father [Updated with instrumental]

    Post by PrincessOfMischief 2/25/2013, 8:26 pm

    oh jub you shady lady
    Cool Nebraska Guy
    Cool Nebraska Guy
    Administrator
    Administrator


    Member Since : 2011-07-28

    Posts : 2985

    Location : The Slums of Nebraska

    Bio : I'm fun.

    Father [Updated with instrumental] Empty Re: Father [Updated with instrumental]

    Post by Cool Nebraska Guy 2/26/2013, 4:40 am

    No shade just T
    Cool Nebraska Guy
    Cool Nebraska Guy
    Administrator
    Administrator


    Member Since : 2011-07-28

    Posts : 2985

    Location : The Slums of Nebraska

    Bio : I'm fun.

    Father [Updated with instrumental] Empty Re: Father [Updated with instrumental]

    Post by Cool Nebraska Guy 2/26/2013, 6:37 pm

    Single Cover:

    [You must be registered and logged in to see this image.]
    avatar
    psychoticmusichead
    Little Monster
    Little Monster


    Member Since : 2011-08-13

    Posts : 1471

    Father [Updated with instrumental] Empty Re: Father [Updated with instrumental]

    Post by psychoticmusichead 2/26/2013, 9:51 pm

    This song reminds me of a song called "A Trophy Father's Trophy Son" by Sleeping With Sirens. That song I listed makes me wanna cry every time I hear it because I relate to it so much.

    This song of yours makes me think of that song, therefore when I was reading this, I nearly teared up. Man, I loved the inspiration behind on how you got the idea. It's very raw and the emotion is out there. The song is perfect the way it is, I think at least.

    8.5/10
    Cool Nebraska Guy
    Cool Nebraska Guy
    Administrator
    Administrator


    Member Since : 2011-07-28

    Posts : 2985

    Location : The Slums of Nebraska

    Bio : I'm fun.

    Father [Updated with instrumental] Empty Re: Father [Updated with instrumental]

    Post by Cool Nebraska Guy 2/26/2013, 9:58 pm

    Psychotic Music Head wrote:This song reminds me of a song called "A Trophy Father's Trophy Son" by Sleeping With Sirens. That song I listed makes me wanna cry every time I hear it because I relate to it so much.

    This song of yours makes me think of that song, therefore when I was reading this, I nearly teared up. Man, I loved the inspiration behind on how you got the idea. It's very raw and the emotion is out there. The song is perfect the way it is, I think at least.

    8.5/10
    Thank you so much <3 That means a lot I'm glad you liked it!
    Cool Nebraska Guy
    Cool Nebraska Guy
    Administrator
    Administrator


    Member Since : 2011-07-28

    Posts : 2985

    Location : The Slums of Nebraska

    Bio : I'm fun.

    Father [Updated with instrumental] Empty Re: Father [Updated with instrumental]

    Post by Cool Nebraska Guy 2/27/2013, 9:26 am

    Here is the instrumental.


    Sponsored content


    Father [Updated with instrumental] Empty Re: Father [Updated with instrumental]

    Post by Sponsored content


      Current date/time is 4/28/2024, 12:25 am